I'm glad you liked! It was a fun afternoon of writing in my backyard getting distracted by my dog. I haven't had any real motivation to try and tackle anything ambitious.
I'm curious, what do you mean spoon-fed the details? I always feel that I don't really put the effort forth to describe these guys since everyone knows them. I also edited this twice, on two separate days (I know, the shock). Maybe I just got a little too wrapped up in the individual sentences. Or I could just wait for you to give me a hint. : )
I still suck at the "then" vs "than" fight. They sound the same in my head and my fingers never ask my brain which one they should type, it's always "then". Thanks muchly for pointing it out again, I should get a Sticky Note of D00M for a reminder.
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:59 am (UTC)I'm curious, what do you mean spoon-fed the details? I always feel that I don't really put the effort forth to describe these guys since everyone knows them. I also edited this twice, on two separate days (I know, the shock). Maybe I just got a little too wrapped up in the individual sentences. Or I could just wait for you to give me a hint. : )
I still suck at the "then" vs "than" fight. They sound the same in my head and my fingers never ask my brain which one they should type, it's always "then". Thanks muchly for pointing it out again, I should get a Sticky Note of D00M for a reminder.