I was talking to my dad about it and I think it would have been better if Micheal Bay hadn't sort of lost track of the story near the end. But my dad said that the story could have been developed a lot more, with clones. And I totally agree. But for what it is, it's really quite good.
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Date: 2005-08-08 05:36 pm (UTC)