I actually think that this turned out better without the sex...wait, did I just say that? OMG, I think I did--never thought that would have come out my mouth. But, yes, the story was great without the sex. I'm sure they'd have sex afterward, but it just worked so well without it. It makes their relationship seem more intimate. Great job, sweetie.
chase_acow
Renae
female/her/she over 40 makes mistakes but easily correctable
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Date: 2008-05-19 06:02 pm (UTC)